Well done again, My friend

Do all the people  already know

the answers that I don’t?

Why do the seams

always all come undone at once?


Some days are harder than others

and mama said, “boys don’t cry”

So I look up

to a blurry image of the sky


Dad said, “for there to be light, there must be dark”

It’s just how the world

keeps turning around and round the lights

Now gone


Well done again my friend

Even if no one

can tell ¬†you how lucky you’ve been

I need you to know

Well done again my friend


Original version: Okdal

Rewritten by: Day6